"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
© Copyright Susie Clevenger 2011
thats a fabulous metaphor.very very evocative.besties to you!
such a fitting way to see it...I felt that feeling.~alaurilee
Nice poem and a great photo. Dramatic!Lorna Cahall
ah this is touching..."My dreams aresilent movieswithout captions."that's brilliant!
They knew how to act then too. All those over-done scenes of fear, and happiness because they had no voices. Loved them! Love ALL the old movies.
"My dreams are silent movies without captions." WOW! Incredible writing.
ain't that the truth. The lips are moving, but I have no idea.....
Great last lines...Nice one ~
At reading this evocative piece, Susie, I actually utter aloud "What do you mean, silent movies without captions?"I so loved the inference, the image, I wanted to know more, more, more!
What an interesting way to think of dreams denied. I really like this.
I agree with the others. "silent movies without captions" is a wonderful phrase, Susie. Good stuff!K
Wowwwww....holy hell, the last lines are slapped me awake. The sad part is there are so many people who feel this way about their lives. If I could, I would take them all to Mexico for shots at the palapa bar on the beach.....we would become fast friends I think.Killer poem Susie.
Amazing! I'm also just blown away by that last line, so nicely written!
Life is what youmake of your dreams.Seems like she has given up...Hey, hope you got to see "The Artist". I was so happy I saw it on the big screen. Loved every minute of it.
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