Chiseled Lips July 05, 2011 Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Madonna stands in her stone garden silent, marble hands in prayer, my sins the beads of her rosary. Forgiveness resting on a petition coming from chiseled lips that have no voice. ©Susie Clevenger 2011 Poetry Palace Comments Ron said… I like it ! It has something ! Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said… This is fun,well done.:) Rachana Shakyawar said… '....stands in the stone...'Yet looks true...like speaking through the silence! And rosary reflecting something real face of tough life..!Love the prose!!So inspiring!!!~Keep the Spark ALive.. Anonymous said… :) the figurative rosary and metaphor, nice twist :)http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/10/20/down-the-line-in-plain-sight/ Isadora said… I particpated in a challenge that had to do with Sacred Music. I have listed it below.Your poem resonates a great message in the connection with the rosary beads as a symbol of more.Well done ... I enjoyed this.Isadorahttp://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.com/2011/11/18/the-benedictine-monastery-academy/ Old Raven said… And stone speaks ... wonderful! JANU said… Sounds like a prayer...nice.
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well done.
:)
Yet looks true...like speaking through the silence! And rosary reflecting something real face of tough life..!
Love the prose!!
So inspiring!!!
~Keep the Spark ALive..
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/10/20/down-the-line-in-plain-sight/
Your poem resonates a great message in the connection with the rosary beads as a symbol of more.
Well done ... I enjoyed this.
Isadora
http://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.com/2011/11/18/the-benedictine-monastery-academy/