"I am hearing poetry when awake, dreaming poetry when asleep, breathing poetry with each breath, I am living in a poem."
What lovely light you have illuminated Susie..Lovely Haiku..I am here:http://rameshsood.blogspot.com/2011/11/oh-moon-faints.htmlDo look at my changed earlier haiku too.. had to edit to put back original and therefore deleted your comment to .. my apologies.. but do have a look again..note the change and comment .. please..
Great words on love, and clever image to go with them.
Hope it continues to burn with love...Happy weekend ~
A nice one Susie. I love the odd way and beauty of your use of the prompt "light". Thanks for sharing.
the light in your pic almost does look like a heart. good choice
Oooh, love it!! :-)
A beating heart does illuminate from within, beautifully written Suzie
A nice picture and love the glow within!! You do have a warm heart Susie!! With all good wishes!!
apt.well done.
You are one "filled with the light of love." Very nice.
love indeed brightens our life :)
Just so lovely. What a great idea for the prompt word.Melanie
ah, that's the best ain't it ? :) love illuminating the beats, than the beats illuminating love.. or maybe it happens both ways?
Susie,Eternal love keeps beating in a lighted way. How nice! Great haiku!Hank
that's an exciting haiku and the heart is truly the source of light. nicely done.
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What lovely light you have illuminated Susie..
Lovely Haiku..
I am here:
http://rameshsood.blogspot.com/2011/11/oh-moon-faints.html
Do look at my changed earlier haiku too.. had to edit to put back original and therefore deleted your comment to .. my apologies.. but do have a look again..note the change and comment .. please..
Great words on love, and clever image to go with them.
Hope it continues to burn with love...Happy weekend ~
A nice one Susie. I love the odd way and beauty of your use of the prompt "light". Thanks for sharing.
the light in your pic almost does look like a heart. good choice
Oooh, love it!! :-)
A beating heart does illuminate from within, beautifully written Suzie
A nice picture and love the glow within!! You do have a warm heart Susie!!
With all good wishes!!
apt.
well done.
You are one "filled with the light of love." Very nice.
love indeed brightens our life :)
Just so lovely. What a great idea for the prompt word.
Melanie
ah, that's the best ain't it ? :) love illuminating the beats, than the beats illuminating love.. or maybe it happens both ways?
Susie,
Eternal love keeps beating in a lighted way. How nice! Great haiku!
Hank
that's an exciting haiku and the heart is truly the source of light. nicely done.
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