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Saturday, June 25, 2011

My Heart Electric

my heart electric
bright incandescent beating
illuminate love


©Susie Clevenger 2011
Haiku Heights Prompt: Light

15 comments :

Ramesh Sood said...

What lovely light you have illuminated Susie..

Lovely Haiku..

I am here:

http://rameshsood.blogspot.com/2011/11/oh-moon-faints.html

Do look at my changed earlier haiku too.. had to edit to put back original and therefore deleted your comment to .. my apologies.. but do have a look again..note the change and comment .. please..

anthonynorth said...

Great words on love, and clever image to go with them.

Grace said...

Hope it continues to burn with love...Happy weekend ~

Chèvrefeuille said...

A nice one Susie. I love the odd way and beauty of your use of the prompt "light". Thanks for sharing.

zongrik said...

the light in your pic almost does look like a heart. good choice

beccagivens said...

Oooh, love it!! :-)

cheryl said...

A beating heart does illuminate from within, beautifully written Suzie

Nanka said...

A nice picture and love the glow within!! You do have a warm heart Susie!!
With all good wishes!!

Morning said...

apt.
well done.

Old Raven said...

You are one "filled with the light of love." Very nice.

meethimirchi said...

love indeed brightens our life :)

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Just so lovely. What a great idea for the prompt word.


Melanie

Leo said...

ah, that's the best ain't it ? :) love illuminating the beats, than the beats illuminating love.. or maybe it happens both ways?

kaykuala said...

Susie,
Eternal love keeps beating in a lighted way. How nice! Great haiku!

Hank

Suzy said...

that's an exciting haiku and the heart is truly the source of light. nicely done.

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